Monday, April 23, 2007
Hey there again. Well I'm somewhat of an idiot because yet again i ALWAYS fail to remember to do my blogs. I hope this can still count as one because I am kind of stuck with the paper I have so far. I know that we can write about whatever we want, but for me thats challenging. I like when we are assigned a certain paper with certain criteria. The paper i have is shitty so Im thinking about just erasing it and starting a whole new one. I think i will write about something like the paper we did when we went out for 30 mintues. I tried to base that off of a James Patterson book and that was fun for me to write. So that's what I'm thinking about writing now!
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Hey! I just read your paper and the story is real interesting. I knew the whole time that something was going to happen but didn't know what and I really liked that about it. Also all the Chicago references were awesome! With Lake Shore Drive and DePaul, it was very nice! The detail and description of the whole story and the characters was very well thought out. I think that sometimes the tenses got mixed up. The 1st paragraph was a little big and hard to maintain focus so if you broke that up it might flow real well, if you split it up into the characters and the setting maybe. My favorite part was the conclusion for sure, I always struggle with my conclusions and I loved yours. I also really liked the reference to God. Overall, it was really well written. The title was clear and makes sense with the story. The dialogue works when you used it and there are no questions that I'm left with at the end. I guess if you just fix the verb tenses and make sure that all the characters are described in the same passage so the reader doesn't get confused that it will come out as a very strong piece of work. Great job!
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