I know my previous post about my paper is somewhat vague and I know now that we have to hand it in in our profolio, so I thought I'd make it better. This paper that I wrote is based on a true story about a good friend of mine. The names are of course aren't real, but the idea of the story is true. I thought that this would be a good topic to write on because it means a lot to me and I really thought I could write it well. The beginning is background about the family and where they live and their jobs and then the middle is just a fun event the family does together and the ending is the devasting part that can change everything.